Those who have left before us
are unable to look back,
in their wake they leave one trailing hand
a phantom touch
suspended at the edge of time.
We cannot follow, only read
the language of their passage –
finding them again
in the slow descent of a single Autumn leaf,
among the many sighs of the ocean
or in the finite beat of our hearts.
A “Day of the Dead” altar located near the Rio Cuale in Puerto Vallarta, Mexico.
anotetohuguette 
This is just so beautiful. As I read, I thought of my father whom I still miss every day.
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Thank you so much for your beautiful words…
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My pleasure.💜
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Reading this literally made me think .”.what is my dad doin up there?”
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I was hoping that my words would bring some comfort or remind us of loved ones who have passed…thank you for sharing your thoughts!
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it did really.. thank you
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You are very welcome!
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I spend time in the kitchen, is where I feel him most
his joy of living bouncing off the walls
In this small galley .
I miss his guidance, still repeat in my mind
every word he spoke, precious ,
Words melted, fusing from steaming pots
and I know he is close.
Sometimes I hear a noise , in the galley
and a picture of him arises from herbs and spices.
I miss my Dad.
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Grandpa was indeed very special! I have lots of good memories – I will never forget the strong scent of cedar in the air as I played beside his beautiful garden! I’m thankful for all the wonderful baking and cooking that you share from spending time in your kitchen with the feeling of him close by.
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Loved your poem Kim, brought back memories of my Dad.
Love Mom
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Memories are like threads that we hold on to, knowing that one day we will find our way back to those who have left before us…I’m glad you loved this poem, Mom!
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Incredible- loved the way u described death in such a way that makes those gone feel alive
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Thank you for this, I wanted to do just that and bring some comfort to those of us who may be missing a loved one.
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Kim, how i love your poetry.. It is so vivid. I can taste every word. Never stop writing . We love your words.
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Thank you (as always) for your very loving thoughts!
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Sooooo beautiful! ☺☺
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Your lovely comment is so appreciated, I’m so glad you enjoyed the read!
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Yes, and I’m for more 😉😍😘
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That’s so sweet!
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I was supposed to say, I’m hoping for more. 😍😘
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Your poems are fabulous!!! they are so heartfelt… I m glad, I m reading them
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Hi, there! So glad you dropped by and thank you so much for your very nice comments, it warms my heart.
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