There you are, standing in your own doorway,
barefoot and bereft of hat,
crow-black hair shaved close to olive skin –
this is the real you, a velvet vision,
someone for me to remember when the mask goes on.
Even I reach for a swipe of dark artifice
around eyes as green as the forest,
armour against a new dawn, performing the same dance,
the hiding of our true selves,
until the day we discard these glittering masks
and kick off our glass shoes.

The glittering lights of the Bright Nights display captured on our favourite inner trail in Stanley Park (Vancouver, B.C.).
Beautiful Post
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Thank you, Emily for stopping by & commenting! I hope to pop by your site soon…
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WOW! Eloquent poetry, Kim.
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Your comment is all I could wish for, Amitav! Thank you (always!) for taking the time to leave such beautiful words…
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I love reading your work.
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Thank you, Amitav (always!)!
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Oh man.
This was so beautifully written. I read it twice!
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Thank you so much, your lovely words have brightened my day!
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Absolutely true, remove the glitter and the real you appears. Of course you remember when I did volunteer hospice work, here is where you meet the real. You have no idea of who they were, bankers, gardeners, home makers, no idea of what they had, home, vehicle, country home, a friends couch, and they are not interested in the glitter. You meet the most remarkable, loveable persons, glitter removed.
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When we are faced with leaving our world, the masks fall away…the glimpse of my neighbour at his door inspired this poem…he was not expecting anyone to come upon him…my glimpsing his true essence surprised us both! Thank you so much for adding your words…they are a reminder for us to be more brave while we are still in this world!
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Wonderful!
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Thank you for stopping by…I’m so glad you enjoyed it!
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Beautiful, Kim. This has so much alluring mystery and feels much like a dance. Loved it!
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Thank you so much for these lovely words…as I wrote this piece I imagined dancers waltzing to music only they could hear and I hoped somehow to convey this with my words…you’ve made my day with your beautiful comment!
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Isn’t amazing how what you see in your imagination is conveyed to mind without having to say it explicitly. The wonderful power of poetry.
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A lovely little ditty. Thanks for sharing on Sunday social.
-Lynn Blair, “The Inked Autist”
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Thank you so much for stopping by via Rachel’s Sunday Social, I appreciate it a lot! I’ll pop by your site soon to have a read or two…see you on the other side!
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Beautiful poetry, Kim.
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I’m so blessed to read your beautiful words…the words that find their way here inspire me (always!)…thank you so much!
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Your most welcome, Kim
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Very romantic.
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Thank you, Rachel! An image of Cinderella’s ball kept dancing through my mind…your beautiful comment adds such a lovely note!
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Yes, very much fairy tale like….I could really envision everything you wrote about, and it is such a bewitching offering…I love it sooooo much…thanks for sharing 🙂
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Bewitching…what a perfect word, Truly! Thank you for stopping by, it means the world to me to see your words here!
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Yep, bewitching is the word that immediately came to mind!!! I am sooo tired today (I woke up way too early), but your poem read like a silky caress for a weary mind…just sooooooo lovely….enchanting 🙂
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I never know the journey my words will take after I hit Publish but if they’re met with beautiful words like these each time, well…
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Great pictures. I completely understood this post from the get go. We all put on some sort of mask when we leave our homes to go to work, school, events, errands and such; we act accordingly to our respective place. When we come home, that’s when we take off our mask and become who we really are. I loved how you always reference nature to your posts Kimberlee!
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Our homes become our sanctuaries…there’s nothing better than closing that front door, putting the kettle on and settling in! Thank you (always!) for your wonderful comments, I always look forward to reading them…
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This is such a moving piece Kim..though i must say it isnt easy to remove our masks and reveal our trueselves especially when our society today is filled with judgemental people..however it is still necessary to start doing so…slowly..
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This is so beautiful…thank you for sharing your thoughts and yes, slowly removing our masks is a great start especially if there are those out there ready to pounce (& judge!). I loved reading your poem, Mich, so glad to see it pop up on my Reader today!
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Lovely!! This made me want to dance the forest 😊
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What a beautiful image…thank you for stopping by…I’m so glad you enjoyed the read!
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The way this poem collides reality with a bit of almost a wistful dreamy fiction is amazing! I love the line, “this is the real you, a velvet vision, someone for me to remember when the mask goes on”. It’s beautiful when you can dance with someone through life, knowing who they are, raw and unadulterated without a mask and accept them as such. It actually seems she has a preference to the other without that mask, and that is beautiful in our façade laden world. Thank you, Kimberlee! ❤ ❤ I ADORE your writing. You are an inspiration and a role model for me in this arena 😉
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Thank you, Mackenzie…it’s so lovely to have your beautiful words here! I think of you often…
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Aww, this comment warmed my heart. Thank you, Kimberlee ❤
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My pleasure (always!)!
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