Winter sun sets low these days
painting the steel blue water
in flames of gold.
I see a young woman on my walk
sitting at an old wooden desk on the damp sand,
writing in a big book as if the cold
means nothing to her fast-moving hand.
A white painted door stands propped up
at the edge of the windswept beach
as if waiting for the knock that might change the world.
In time, I come across a small brown wren
sitting upon a wall of stone,
its bright eyes turned towards the setting sun
and in that moment, I understood
some of the words the language of beauty
has been speaking all along.
It’s funny how the beauty of language isn’t always communicated through words, but rather through the beauty in the world around us- through the flutter of a bird’s wings, through the magic of a stunning sunset, even through the chilliest of winter days. 😊
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Your words are stunningly beautiful, thank you so much for adding another lovely layer to my words!
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Its the sudden snow fall, bringing change, all seeking the sun, praising its daily route, warming hearts and hands. The quiet snow brings, setting on a busy city, smiles on faces, blowing the flakes with frosty breath, a gift to all , as the chill heightens our awareness and we like the bird pay homage to a greater known.
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I love this line, the quiet snow brings, it’s true, the world’s busy sounds find themselves blanketed in pure white allowing nature to simply be! Thank you, Mom, for your poetic thoughts, especially on the first day of winter!
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Your words always bring magic here Shirley.
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I love this phrase “ a white painted door stands propped up at the edge of the windswept beach
as WAITING FOR THE KNOCK THAT MIGHT CHANGE THE WORLD”. I love that image. You never cease to amaze me my lovely friend.
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Hello, dear neighbour! On my seawall walk I came across some film students and their props, they were filming a scene at English Bay and suddenly the words to this poem started to make themselves known! Thank you (always!) for your unwavering support, Huguette!
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I just simply love how you find magic whenever you go out on your walks. What seems like the ordinary for most people, you see the beauty in the sights that you behold. Stunning, simply stunning Kimberlee.
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Thank you for these beautiful words…the days that pass by are full of all kinds of beauty just waiting to be discovered…lately I’m loving the cotton candy colours of our winter sunrises and the glow of the sparkling crescent moon in the sky! I hope you & your lovely family have a wonderful holiday season.
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Nice…
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Thank you for stopping by & commenting…I’m so glad you enjoyed my words!
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You are unfailing gifted and always surprising!!!! Thank you for sharing…I love this so much 🙂
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Happy Christmas, Truly! Thank you for stopping by & leaving such lovely words…I can hardly wait to read your latest posts over the holidays!
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As i always say anything about winter amazes me..(we dont.have it here)…and you amazed me more with your gift of.words Kim…you bring life to it..you literally made me experience it..
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I’m so glad you enjoyed my winter prose…this morning the snow on the mountains with the sun shining just so would take your breath away…thank you (always!) for your very kind words, Mich and best wishes for the coming new year!
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I love this imagery.
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Thank you so much for stopping by & leaving your lovely words…it warms the heart on a cold winter’s day!
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Lovely poem full of imagery.
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Thank you so much…I appreciate you stopping by & having a read…your feedback means a lot!
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This is so beautiful. 🙂
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On this cold winter’s day, your words have warmed my heart, thank you so much!
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I am reading a book called ‘ Letters from a Father to her Daughter’ by Jawaharlal Nehru. The author describes about the many stories that nature has to tell us – from the tiny smooth pebble to the beautiful mountains, the stories that lay hidden in them all will be more realistic than a fairy tale. Your beautiful poem brought back the words in that book.
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Your beautiful words have left a rush of emotion within me…each time I post the words that find themselves in my tiny notebook, I hope to evoke that very thing, “from the tiny smooth pebble to the beautiful mountains, the stories that lay hidden in them all will be more realistic than a fairy tale”…your words are a gift, thank you so much…I’m beyond touched!
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Your poems and prose are a gift to us too, Kim and how beautifully you string them together. So glad that you loved that little extract from the book. 🙂
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It sounds like a book I would love to read…
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I am sure it will be a enjoyable read.
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