What came before, she no longer remembered
there is only damp stone and ruined walls now,
a mean shelter among the tall firs of the silent forest,
this new life a blank slate, waiting for what, she did not know.
Flashes of light and a feeling of immense pressure from the time before
weigh heavily upon her bruised mind,
it seems a destructive wave wiped all parasitic thought dwelling there,
seeding new ones in their place.
Haunted by images of singed snow white wings
no longer aloft naked shoulders
with the storms of a millennium swirling in her dark eyes,
she stepped lightly upon the path of a new age to seek out her kind…
This is incredible poetry, Kim. I had to pause after every line as such vivid imagery made me ponder.
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It’s lovely to read your words, thank you again, Amitav and I’m so glad that my words resonated…
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The images created in each verse are so vivid i can clealy see through it.
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This is lovely to read, thank you so much, your words never fail to warm my heart!
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Beautifully written Kim. I look forward to reading more…
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You are the sweetest, thank you so much!
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Beautiful!
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This means a lot, thank you for stopping by and leaving such a lovely comment!
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Wow Kimberlee, such elegance in your words. I especially related to the line “Flashes of light and a feeling of immense pressure from the time before…weigh heavily upon her bruised mind.” Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
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I’m learning to stay open to the voices who prod me to write their stories, this beautiful voice had a lovely tale to tell and I’m glad you enjoyed the read! Thank you (again!) for your wonderful words, they warm the heart!
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Your paint a beautiful imagery from the depths of your creative eye, Kim! As always, a pleasure to read your poems!
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Your kind words are a joy to read, thank you so much! I’m so glad you enjoy these reads…
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Simply beautiful.
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Thank you from the bottom of my heart for your lovely words!
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You’re very welcome! I thoroughly enjoyed reading your beautiful words.😊
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